Veterans Day

Today we honor our military veterans, defined by an unknown author this way:

A Veteran — whether active duty, retired, National Guard or Reserve — is someone who, at one point in their life, wrote a check made payable to The United States of America, for an amount of: ‘Up to and including my life.’

Thank you to everyone who has served our country so our flag still flies flee and proud.

 

 

ALMIGHTY God, our heavenly Father, in whose hands are the living and the dead; We give thee thanks for all those thy servants who have offered their lives in the service of our country. Grant to them thy mercy and the light of thy presence, both now and ever. Stretch forth, we pray thee, thine almighty arm to strengthen and protect the soldiers, sailors, airmen, and marines of our country. Support them in the day of battle, and in the time of peace keep them safe from all evil; endue them with courage and loyalty; and grant that in all things they may serve without reproach; through Jesus Christ our Lord. Amen.

Thanks for Helping Me Support NDVH

Thanks to everyone who ordered a copy of Dream or Destiny during October or made relevant comments on posts in the domestic violence series between October 28 and October 31. With your help, I donated $250 to the National Domestic Violence Hotline (NDVH) during Domestic Violence Awareness Month. I wish there were a lot more zeros in that number, but books published by small presses don’t sell millions or even thousands of copies, and I know every donation of any size helps.

International Day of Prayer for the Persecuted Church

Today is a day set aside to pray for the persecuted church. In the United States, we often take our religious freedom for granted, but around the world Christians are risking their lives just for being believers.

Learn more about persecution and what you can do to help:

• The International Day of Prayer for the Persecuted Church
• Voice of the Martyrs
• Open Doors
• International Christian Concern

You can find Scriptural guidance on praying for persecuted Christians at How to Pray for the Persecuted Church.

Look with pity, we beseech thee, O Lord,  upon the sorrows of thy persecuted servants for whom our prayers are offered. Remember them, O Lord, in mercy; endue their souls with patience; strengthen them with thy power; comfort them with a sense of thy goodness; lift up thy countenance upon them, and give them peace; through Jesus Christ our Lord. Amen.

Interview with David Bowles, author of The Westward Sagas

My guest today is David Bowles, a client and friend. He has just released the second book in his historical fiction trilogy, which I edited for him.

Lillie: Thank you for visiting A Writer’s Words, An Editor’s Eye today, David. Of course, I know all about Adam’s Daughters, but my readers don’t. Please tell them about your latest book.

David: The Westward Sagas tell the story of the Mitchell family’s 100-year odyssey west from Pennsylvania to Texas. In Adam’s Daughters: Book 2, Peggy Mitchell, a survivor of the Battle of Guilford Courthouse, grows up in Jonesborough, Tennessee during the tumultuous first twenty years of the nation’s existence. Though haunted by memories of war, she matures into strong, independent young woman who is courted by Andrew Jackson and who has a freed slave as her best friend. Her younger brothers and sisters become her surrogate children and students. Together the children of Adam and Elizabeth take on renegade Indians, highwaymen, and the hardships of an untamed land.

Lillie: I always like to know the story behind the story. Where did you get the idea for The Westward Sagas?

David: Actually, I started writing my family history. Adam Mitchell is my fourth great grandfather. He was a patriot in the Revolutionary War, and I wanted to share his story and the story of the rest of his family, who were also heroes. However, when I wrote the family history, it was so boring that my children and grandchildren didn’t want to read it. So I decided to write the stories as fiction so I could use my imagination and creativity to fill in the gaps in known history and add dialogue. I still wanted the history and genealogy to be accurate, so I’ve done a great deal of research.

Lillie: I’m impressed that you write nothing that couldn’t have happened. Even when you make something up, you make the story fit the known facts. In Adam’s Daughters, Peggy Mitchell is courted by and eventually spurns Andrew Jackson, who went on to become the seventh president of the United States. Can you share a little about that with my readers?

David:  I’ll be happy to. There is no record that Andrew Jackson courted Peggy Mitchell. However, it is possible—perhaps likely. We know Andrew was in Jonesborough in 1788. He and Peggy were both young and unmarried, and there were not many marriageable men and women in the area at the time. Judge McNairy was a close friend of both the Mitchell family and Andrew Jackson, so it is probable that he would have introduced his friends to each other. Andrew Jackson recorded Margaret Mitchell’s will in Nashville, so he obviously had some contact with the Mitchell family. Did Andrew Jackson court Peggy Mitchell? No one knows. Is it possible? Absolutely.

Lillie: I know how meticulous your research is and how much input you get on your work in progress. Tell us something about your process.

David: I’ve always loved history and was fascinated by the stories of my ancestors I heard from my relatives when I growing up. I’ve been researching my family for years, but I did a lot more research for the books. I’ve made several trips to North Carolina and Tennessee where the stories are set, even worshipping in the church my ancestors attended more than 200 years ago. As I finished each chapter of the book, I had you do a quick edit then took it to the Christian Writers Group of the Greater San Antonio Area for critique.

Lillie: Those quick edits were just to clean up grammar, spelling, and punctuation so the writers of your critique group could focus on content.

David: The members of the group really gave me valuable feedback. I’ve learned a lot about writing from them, and my book is much better because of their input. After the critiques, you and I talked about the suggestions, and you made edits to incorporate the changes. When I finished the entire manuscript, you and I each went over it several times and discussed what we found or changes we thought were needed. One of the best things we did was a read-aloud edit.

Lillie: I encourage writers to read their work aloud, ideally to another writer or an editor, but if that’s not feasible, just reading aloud or into a tape recorder is a huge help. It’s amazing what you can discover by reading aloud that you didn’t catch when reading silently.

David: Reading aloud was helpful, and so was getting feedback from my advance readers. People who live in the area where the story is set, someone who knows Jewish customs (for a scene where Peggy and her sisters have Shabbat dinner with a Jewish family), folks who know about the history of the time and the genealogy of the people involved, and readers who enjoy a good book all gave valuable feedback. Then you and I talked again, and you incorporated the changes we agreed with. When I started writing, I had no idea there would be so many edits and revisions.

Lillie: Most writers don’t realize how much writing and re-writing comes after the first draft. Maybe it’s a good idea they don’t—they might hesitate to start writing if they did. I’m glad you started and followed through with The Westward Sagas, and I know readers agree. You’ve done a good job of building your platform and promoting your book. Tell us about it.

David: Early on, I understood that I have a large market among descendants of Adam Mitchell as well as other families in my books. I launched Adam’s Daughters in Jonesborough, Tennessee. Many of the people there are descendants of families in my books, and if they’re not descendants they know of the families. The Chester Inn is on the book cover—it was just being built in Adam’s Daughters, and it’s a landmark today, a historical building that serves today as the offices of the National Storytelling Association. The people in the area recognize it immediately and are likely to be interested in a book about their hometown. Another segment of my market is people who love history but who don’t have a direct connection to the setting or characters in my books. They enjoy reading about history and appreciate knowing that the history is accurate—either it really happened or it could have happened as written based on known history.

Lillie: You have a well-defined audience, and you’ve marketed to it successfully.  I know you sold a lot of books in Jonesborough during the National Storytelling Festival as well as at the Adam Mitchell family reunion. For readers who missed you in those place, where can they buy the book? Is Adam’s daughters available both in print and e-book?

David: Yes, Adam’s Daughters is available in both print and electronic formats. Readers can order an autographed copy of the print book or download an e-book on my Web site, WestwardSagas.com.  They can order the book in print and Kindle edition from Amazon.com, in print from most bookstores (often by special order), and in e-book formats at Smashwords.com.  I’m happy that through Smashwords I’m participating in Operation EBook Drop—through that program I give free e-books to soldiers.

Lillie: I just wrote about Operation EBook Drop earlier this week, and I know you’ve written about it on your blog as well. Where can readers find your blog and learn more about you and your books?

David: They’re invited to visit my website, WestwardSagas.com.  To read the blog, click on Blog on the menu. To learn more about me or my books, click on David Bowles or Westward Sagas.

Lillie: Is there anything else you’d like to share that I haven’t asked?

David: Just how important it is that we tell our family stories to our children and our grandchildren as the stories need to be passed on for future generations.

Lillie: Thank you for visiting. I’m sure I didn’t ask everything my readers want to know so I hope you’ll check in during the day to answer questions.

David: I’ll be glad to respond to comments. Thank you for having me as your guest today.

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David Bowles, a native of Austin, Texas, lives in San Antonio with his best friend and constant companion Lulubelle, a yellow Lab. He grew up listening to stories of his ancestors told by family members in the generation before him. The stories fascinated David so much that he grew up to become a tale-spinner, spinning tales through the written word in The Westward Sagas and through the spoken word speaking to groups of both adults and children.

David started writing stories of his family to ensure that his children and grandchildren had accurate records of the family history. However, while the original versions, written in narrative textbook style, did maintain the records, they didn’t maintain the interest of the readers. So he used his imagination and creativity to fill in the gaps of what might have happened when the details weren’t available. He created dialogue and scenes to add true life drama to the story of the Mitchell Family from colonial days to the settlement of the West. He hopes these stories fascinate his readers as much as the stories of his ancestors have always fascinated him.

Disclosure:David pays me for work I do but did not pay for this interview. The Amazon link is an affiliate link; if you order books through the other links, I do not make a commission.

Prayers for Fort Hood

For Those Who Died:
REMEMBER thy servants—the victims who were murdered today at Fort Hood, O Lord, according to the favour which thou bearest unto thy people, and grant that, increasing in knowledge and love of thee, they may go from strength to strength, in the life of perfect service, in thy heavenly kingdom; through Jesus Christ our Lord, who liveth and reigneth with thee and the Holy Ghost ever, one God, world without end. Amen.

For Those in Mourning:
O MERCIFUL God, and heavenly Father, who hast taught us in thy holy Word that thou dost not willingly afflict or grieve the children of men; Look with pity, we beseech thee, upon the mourning of thy servants for whom our prayers are offered. Remember them, O Lord, in mercy; comfort them with a sense of thy goodness; lift up thy countenance upon them, and give them peace; through Jesus Christ our Lord. Amen.

For Those Who Were Injured:
ALMIGHTY God our heavenly Father, we beseech thee graciously to comfort thy servants in their sufferings and to bless the means made use of for their cures. Fill their hearts with confidence, that though they be sometime afraid, they yet may put their trust in thee; through Jesus Christ our Lord. Amen.

Freelance Rates Survey Ends Next Week

I’ve been running a freelance writing and editing rates survey for several weeks but haven’t had a great deal of response. My goal is to have statistically significant information for my two-part series scheduled for the third week in November.

The survey is anonymous, quick, and easy. There are only six multiple-choice questions:

How long have you freelanced part-time or full-time?

What kind of freelancer are you—writer, editor, both?

How do you find freelance jobs?

How do you price your work—hourly, project, bid, etc.?

What is your standard hourly or word rate?

Do you post your rates?

An optional seventh question gives you the opportunity to add comments and further information.

If you are a freelance writer or editor—part-time or full-time—and have not already done so, please take the survey by Wednesday, November 12. Then come back the following week for the series on pricing, including the results of the survey.

Operaton EBook Drop: Free Books for Deployed Soldiers

As you know if you’ve read my blog for a while, I’m a big supporter of our military troops. I try to do anything I can to thank the brave men and women who risk their lives daily to protect our freedoms.

So I am excited about Operation EBook Drop (OED), a  program through which authors can offer their books to deployed soldiers for free.

Updated: in early December 2009, Operation EBook Drop started its own Web site and forum at Operation EBook Drop.

It started simply enough when an author and a deployed soldier met online. The soldier mentioned that he had a Kindle
but couldn’t download books from Amazon because the Whispernet didn’t work in Iraq. The author, Ed Patterson, offered to send the soldier a copy of each of his books.

Then Ed invited other authors on the Kindleboards forum to join him.  Other soldiers asked for books, and the program grew quickly. As soon as I heard about it, I contacted my clients and asked if they wanted to join me in this project. Most of them did, and I have been busy adding their books and mine. We make the books available for sale on Smashwords.com, an e-book publisher and distributor. We then create a coupon for military members that gives them a 100% discount. I contacted Ed to get my clients and me added as OED authors. Ed sends us the names of military members requesting free e-books, and we e-mail the soldiers with information about our books and the Smashwords discount.

E-books from Smashwords can be read on a computer, Kindle, Sony reader, and other e-book readers. Anyone can purchase our books from Smashwords (or the stores in its distribution network), and we would love to sell more books. However, the main reason we put our books on Smashwords is to offer them to deployed military members through Operation EBook Drop. Reading e-books helps soldiers pass the time and relieve stress. We’ve heard back from troops thanking us for the books—they are the ones deserving our thanks, and OED gives us a chance to say “thank you” in a tangible way.

Please pass on the information about Operation EBook Drop to any members of the military you know and encourage other authors to contribute their books.

Logo Credit: From the Imagination and Graphic Artistry of K.A. M’Lady & P.M. Dittman

National Family Literacy Day

Today is National Family Literacy Day. I’ve written about literacy before, and I recognize that family involvement in developing children’s literacy is important.

Here are some resources and family literacy activities and events:

• ReadWriteThink, a partnership between the International Reading Association (IRA) and the National Council of Teachers of English (NCTE)
• National Center for Family Literacy
• Pennsylvania Center for the Book Family Literacy Activities
• Parents and Children Together Online Family Literacy Fun Activities

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