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	<title>Comments on: Editing: Part 1 &#8211; What is editing?</title>
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		<title>By: Lillie</title>
		<link>http://lillieammann.com/2008/01/22/editing-part-1-what-is-editing/comment-page-1/#comment-2451</link>
		<dc:creator>Lillie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 01 Mar 2008 06:17:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Jason,
At least your father started off with something positive. :-) That exercise probably formed an excellent foundation for your future writing.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Jason,<br />
At least your father started off with something positive. <img src='http://lillieammann.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':-)' class='wp-smiley' />  That exercise probably formed an excellent foundation for your future writing.</p>
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		<title>By: Jason Pearson</title>
		<link>http://lillieammann.com/2008/01/22/editing-part-1-what-is-editing/comment-page-1/#comment-2450</link>
		<dc:creator>Jason Pearson</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 01 Mar 2008 04:23:21 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I remember when I was a freshman in high school and I asked my father to edit my english composition.  I was expecting him to fix my spelling and grammar.  He came back to me and said, &quot;Well I like the first part of your very first sentence.&quot;  Thus began my numerous rewrites for my father.  And yes, I did get an &quot;A&quot;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I remember when I was a freshman in high school and I asked my father to edit my english composition.  I was expecting him to fix my spelling and grammar.  He came back to me and said, &#8220;Well I like the first part of your very first sentence.&#8221;  Thus began my numerous rewrites for my father.  And yes, I did get an &#8220;A&#8221;</p>
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		<title>By: A Writer&#8217;s Words, An Editor&#8217;s Eye &#187; Blog Archive &#187; Your Thoughts on Series</title>
		<link>http://lillieammann.com/2008/01/22/editing-part-1-what-is-editing/comment-page-1/#comment-2449</link>
		<dc:creator>A Writer&#8217;s Words, An Editor&#8217;s Eye &#187; Blog Archive &#187; Your Thoughts on Series</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 01 Feb 2008 15:05:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] always written series posts consecutively (as the editing series just completed). However, I&#8217;ve noticed that other blogs spread their series over a longer [...]</description>
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		<title>By: Lillie</title>
		<link>http://lillieammann.com/2008/01/22/editing-part-1-what-is-editing/comment-page-1/#comment-2447</link>
		<dc:creator>Lillie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 23 Jan 2008 20:50:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Georganna,

I agree with you on changing passive to active and getting rid of &quot;There were,&quot; etc.

However, I always add serial commas unless the piece I&#039;m editing is for a newspaper or other publication that uses APA style. A perfect example that we don&#039;t all agree.

I intend to make clear that my suggestions are my opinions only and others have different ideas. If I fail to do this, bring me back in line. Links to other resources should give readers a range of ideas to choose from.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Georganna,</p>
<p>I agree with you on changing passive to active and getting rid of &#8220;There were,&#8221; etc.</p>
<p>However, I always add serial commas unless the piece I&#8217;m editing is for a newspaper or other publication that uses APA style. A perfect example that we don&#8217;t all agree.</p>
<p>I intend to make clear that my suggestions are my opinions only and others have different ideas. If I fail to do this, bring me back in line. Links to other resources should give readers a range of ideas to choose from.</p>
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		<title>By: Georganna Hancock</title>
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		<dc:creator>Georganna Hancock</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 23 Jan 2008 20:15:50 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>One surprise I&#039;ve found when talking with others who perform editing services is that we all don&#039;t agree. Each editor has her special quirks.  I try to lay mine out for potential clients and stress that I will do whatever the client wants. Left on my own, however, I&#039;ll change most passive sentences to active voice, remove serial commas (this year) and rewrite any sentence beginning with &quot;There were&quot; or &quot;It was&quot;.

I think too many writers still believe some mythological &quot;rules&quot; govern writing beyond even various style guides.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>One surprise I&#8217;ve found when talking with others who perform editing services is that we all don&#8217;t agree. Each editor has her special quirks.  I try to lay mine out for potential clients and stress that I will do whatever the client wants. Left on my own, however, I&#8217;ll change most passive sentences to active voice, remove serial commas (this year) and rewrite any sentence beginning with &#8220;There were&#8221; or &#8220;It was&#8221;.</p>
<p>I think too many writers still believe some mythological &#8220;rules&#8221; govern writing beyond even various style guides.</p>
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