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	<title>Comments on: Editing: Part 1 - What is editing?</title>
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	<description>A Writer's Words, An Editor's Eye</description>
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		<title>By: Lillie</title>
		<link>http://lillieammann.com/2008/01/22/editing-part-1-what-is-editing/comment-page-1/#comment-2451</link>
		<dc:creator>Lillie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 01 Mar 2008 06:17:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Jason,
At least your father started off with something positive. :-) That exercise probably formed an excellent foundation for your future writing.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Jason,<br />
At least your father started off with something positive. <img src='http://lillieammann.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':-)' class='wp-smiley' /> That exercise probably formed an excellent foundation for your future writing.</p>
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		<title>By: Jason Pearson</title>
		<link>http://lillieammann.com/2008/01/22/editing-part-1-what-is-editing/comment-page-1/#comment-2450</link>
		<dc:creator>Jason Pearson</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 01 Mar 2008 04:23:21 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I remember when I was a freshman in high school and I asked my father to edit my english composition.  I was expecting him to fix my spelling and grammar.  He came back to me and said, "Well I like the first part of your very first sentence."  Thus began my numerous rewrites for my father.  And yes, I did get an "A"</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I remember when I was a freshman in high school and I asked my father to edit my english composition.  I was expecting him to fix my spelling and grammar.  He came back to me and said, &#8220;Well I like the first part of your very first sentence.&#8221;  Thus began my numerous rewrites for my father.  And yes, I did get an &#8220;A&#8221;</p>
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		<title>By: A Writer&#8217;s Words, An Editor&#8217;s Eye &#187; Blog Archive &#187; Your Thoughts on Series</title>
		<link>http://lillieammann.com/2008/01/22/editing-part-1-what-is-editing/comment-page-1/#comment-2449</link>
		<dc:creator>A Writer&#8217;s Words, An Editor&#8217;s Eye &#187; Blog Archive &#187; Your Thoughts on Series</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 01 Feb 2008 15:05:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] always written series posts consecutively (as the editing series just completed). However, I&#8217;ve noticed that other blogs spread their series over a longer [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] always written series posts consecutively (as the editing series just completed). However, I&#8217;ve noticed that other blogs spread their series over a longer [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Lillie</title>
		<link>http://lillieammann.com/2008/01/22/editing-part-1-what-is-editing/comment-page-1/#comment-2447</link>
		<dc:creator>Lillie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 23 Jan 2008 20:50:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Georganna,

I agree with you on changing passive to active and getting rid of "There were," etc.

However, I always add serial commas unless the piece I'm editing is for a newspaper or other publication that uses APA style. A perfect example that we don't all agree.

I intend to make clear that my suggestions are my opinions only and others have different ideas. If I fail to do this, bring me back in line. Links to other resources should give readers a range of ideas to choose from.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Georganna,</p>
<p>I agree with you on changing passive to active and getting rid of &#8220;There were,&#8221; etc.</p>
<p>However, I always add serial commas unless the piece I&#8217;m editing is for a newspaper or other publication that uses APA style. A perfect example that we don&#8217;t all agree.</p>
<p>I intend to make clear that my suggestions are my opinions only and others have different ideas. If I fail to do this, bring me back in line. Links to other resources should give readers a range of ideas to choose from.</p>
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		<title>By: Georganna Hancock</title>
		<link>http://lillieammann.com/2008/01/22/editing-part-1-what-is-editing/comment-page-1/#comment-2448</link>
		<dc:creator>Georganna Hancock</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 23 Jan 2008 20:15:50 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>One surprise I've found when talking with others who perform editing services is that we all don't agree. Each editor has her special quirks.  I try to lay mine out for potential clients and stress that I will do whatever the client wants. Left on my own, however, I'll change most passive sentences to active voice, remove serial commas (this year) and rewrite any sentence beginning with "There were" or "It was".

I think too many writers still believe some mythological "rules" govern writing beyond even various style guides.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>One surprise I&#8217;ve found when talking with others who perform editing services is that we all don&#8217;t agree. Each editor has her special quirks.  I try to lay mine out for potential clients and stress that I will do whatever the client wants. Left on my own, however, I&#8217;ll change most passive sentences to active voice, remove serial commas (this year) and rewrite any sentence beginning with &#8220;There were&#8221; or &#8220;It was&#8221;.</p>
<p>I think too many writers still believe some mythological &#8220;rules&#8221; govern writing beyond even various style guides.</p>
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